[Wesleyan Place, Kentish Town]114
June 11 1820.
My dear Taylor — In reading over the proof of St. Agnes’s Eve since I left Fleet Street, I was struck with what appears to me an alteration in the seventh stanza very much for the worse. The passage I mean stands thus —
her maiden eyes incline
Still on the floor, while many a sweeping train
’Twas originally written —
her maiden eyes divine
Fix’d on the floor, saw many a sweeping train
My meaning is quite destroyed in the alteration. I do not use train for concourse of passers by, but for skirts sweeping along the floor.
In the first stanza my copy reads, second line —
bitter chill it was,
to avoid the echo cold in the second line.
Ever yours sincerely
114 Brown having let his house (Wentworth Place) when he started for a fresh Scotch tour on May 7, Keats moved to lodgings at the above address in order to be near Leigh Hunt, who was then living in Mortimer Terrace, Kentish Town.
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